It’s been a few weeks since I completed my artwork for September, The Journey. I know at the time I said I’d write a journal post about how I’d put it all together, but with pressure at work and a tough time at home I let this slip somewhat. I have, however, wanted to write this and have made a few notes here and there which I think I can cobble together as a coherent journal post now.
The Journey is one of those pieces I’ve truly gone out of my way to make something special. When I started it I didn’t intend for it to end up as epic as it did, it’s only after I’d restarted the image twice and spent a significant amount of time on it that I realised I wanted it to stand out and be something special. In total, I spent about 3 hours a day for 21 days working on it, and I’m very happy indeed with the way it’s turned out.
When I started, the image was supposed to be a “cutesy” image of a boy and a girl on a couch in the afternoon sunlight—as a matter of fact, the file name is “couch.svg” which is somewhat telling. Of course, they couldn’t just be sitting down: that would be too boring. I experimented with making them do things like reading or playing video games together, but nothing really stood out as interesting. I also toyed with them sitting at opposite ends as if they’d just had an argument, but the image started to lose its appeal when I did that.
After a few “ideations” on this design, I decided it would be a more touching image if the couple were being a bit more intimate—but after August’s image, I didn’t want to get too intimate. It was therefore a pretty obvious choice to have them asleep on each other’s shoulders, which led to the pose that you see in the final image. The location changed quite a few times in the first “sketches” (if that’s what you call the scratchy lines I drew in Inkscape) before I settled on the train carriage.
Train journeys have been one of those things that I’ve been doing for a large portion of my life. I’m one of those people who will end up taking a metro over equivalent transportation—I feel at home on the London Underground or the Singapore MRT, for instance. Placing the scene in a train carriage just reverberated with me and that was the reason why I could shamelessly slot myself into this picture along with “best girl lel”.
The carriage itself draws on inspiration from my time in Asia. Here in the UK, train carriages generally tend to have seats facing the front and back of the carriage, so you face the direction the train is going, or find yourself moving backwards. However, in countries like Singapore and Japan, the train seats in their commuter trains tend to be along the sides of the carriage. I think the decision of drawing the train this way is probably because I wanted to show scenery in the background. Since it’s been a year since my trip to Japan, I decided that it would be nice to commemorate it by drawing a train in the style of a Tokyo or Kyoto commuter train.
I’ll admit I didn’t think much about the backdrop outside the train carriage to start with. I drew a very simple backdrop at first: some trees and basic, uncoloured telegraph pylons and released a “work in progress” to my friends, who instantly commented that the overall picture had a distinct Japanese flair to it. Since I was already pulling ideas from my time in Asia, it wasn’t hard to take inspiration for the scenery from there too. The scenery is actually more based off the area of Thailand where my mother was born: the telegraph pole streetlamps I’ve drawn are actually based on streetlamps around my parents’ house.
I know I’ve been concentrating on Paige a lot recently in terms of characters used. I’ve not hidden the fact that she’s my idea of “the perfect girl” and I guess I have been a bit obsessed with getting her looking right over the course of this last year. In the original comics I drew, I hinted at her being close to my character. In the Reboot of these comics, I hinted at that no longer being the case. I’ve never actually confirmed this connection, so I guess you can now take this as the official canon version of events that there’s a connection there. That said, I am going to shift the focus off her for a bit: it’s getting a little repetitive drawing her every time and I’m pretty sure she’s a bit sick of the limelight right now
The rest is the same story as usual. I’ve concentrated a lot on lighting in this picture, and I think it’s paid off. Admittedly I haven’t mixed the lighting from inside and outside the carriage, so the afternoon sun isn’t casting shadows, but I’ve tried to make everything inside the carriage appear lit from the ceiling lighting. I also put more emphasis on lighting on clothes, which is something I’ve already started using in October’s image. I also brought forward some of the new learning I picked up in previous months—most notably the lighting on faces and hair, and some smaller things like Paige’s fringes being semi-transparent where the hair is thinner.
There are parts that I’m not entirely happy with. For example, I’m still trying to get clouds looking decent—the current style I’m using is slightly too hard-edged. Also, the more I look at it, the more I’m starting to think the scenery is a little too small and may have been better if it filled more of the window. Fortunately, most of the annoyances are minor and don’t detract too much from the overall composition.
I’ve already completed October’s image at time of writing this—and it’s already used a lot of the things I’ve learnt from The Journey, even though it’s a significantly more simple image than this one. As always, it’s a learning process and is definitely helping me improve overall.